A little late notice but better late then never:
NOTES ON READ THROUGH
- Timing is key in this setting. A misplaced zombie groan or an out of place audience scream can kill the mood.
- (Something for me to do) re-emphasize specific beats within each scene. Seeing the play read under a more professional light showed me something on how important it is for actors to know when to emphasize.
- Possible trimming of some of the dialogue? Felt like the play lagged in some ways.
- Work on reformatting to play
All I can think of for now