A fine evening to you all on this fair night.
Just wanted to let everybody know that I just completed a revision of the script and will be sending it out shortly. The biggest change was the addition of the zombie plotline into the third scene, however I also added wrote in Eli's character and made some adjustments to the back and forth between Ralph and Richard. Besides some grammar corrections that's about it at this point. Let me know what you think and if there are any clarifications needed feel free to ask.
Have a good weekend,